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TylynRae

  • Art & Photography Re: Take A Chance Part 2

    Hey there =] Firstly, these are great. The first one is by far my favorite. The proportions are right on and the shading is spectacular. It's really quite lovely =] ...

    Jul 4, 2011
  • Other Re: More Summer Mixes (Presents for YWS)

    This is like... totally rad! You have amazing taste in music! =] I especially like the album art and such. The styles are really awesome and give a taste of ...

    Jul 4, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: My Heart does not have Immortality

    Hello there. 1. You spelled does wrong. Dose= does 2. You need to capitalize the title. 3. There are a lot of small grammatical errors, like leaving an s off ...

    Jul 4, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Stop And Stare Contest Entry

    @ Everyone, I used picnick, its a really cool site. And @ jasminebells, thats totally not rude! I meant to do that but completely forgot. Thanks for the reminder!=]

    Jul 4, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Stop And Stare Contest Entry

    This is my entry for the Stop and Stare contest hosted by Skins. Hope you like it! Stop And Stare.jpg Also, to view full size, just click on the picture ...

    Jul 4, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Hold my heart in my hand <3

    i think its really nice. It has a good vintage feel to it =] I think the shape of the hand is a bit too stiff but other than that ...

    Jul 4, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Your Brother...

    Hey there =] I thought the idea of this was really good. But I wish it would executed a little bit more differently. The poem was a bit messy. The ...

    Jul 4, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: The last Good-bye

    Hey there =] This is really good. THe shading you did on the buildings and in her hair are fantastic, though I think I would have darkened it up a ...

    Jul 3, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: The Death of Spring

    This was really cool. The set up was very original and rather refreshing =]. It was a bit odd to read, but I think thats just because you don't see ...

    Jul 3, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: What is

    Very well done. You're grammar was flawless, I think, and the message was clear and blunt. Straight to the point. Job well done =]

    Jul 3, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Heeeeelllllllloooooo!!!!!

    Heyo there =] Welcome to YWS! Hope you're enjoying it so far =]. If you have any questions, you can ask just about any of us, we're all here to ...

    Jul 2, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Sand and Water

    No comment. Actually... Yeah. I'll comment. GAH this is flipping amazing! I can't really say much else, because thats about the only thing that comes to mind... The colors are ...

    Jul 2, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: my life be like a theme park

    Um. This sort of drove me nuts. First: The title. It needs capitalized. Second: Your grammar is off. A lot. Third: You didn't capitalize I hardly ever. Those are the ...

    Jul 2, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: The Theory of Parallelism - Chapter 1 [Edit 1]

    I totally loved this! First: The freud pun was absolutely hilarious. Considering I'm huge into psychology, that won some total brownie points =] Two: I LOVE that this is isn't ...

    Jul 2, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: One Time Only

    First Verse: You say chivalry, open car doors, throw your coat down on a muddy street. Flowers ready, my hand in yours and kisses sweet. Nothing rushed only too real ...

    Jul 2, 2011


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