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Re: ghost
Sooo, Percy, sort of jealous of your talent, not going to lie. =] This piece was really moving, and I liked how you didn't capitalize much, though that usually drives ...
Jul 15, 2011 -
Re: A Tribute to Harry Potter
Hey there =] This was really good. I had a friend thats absolutely in love with the series go to the midnight premiere. I'm glad that this series has helped ...
Jul 15, 2011 -
Re: Carry Me Home Chapter 10
Chapter Ten “Good morning.” A low voice whispered in my ear. I opened my eyes for the briefest of moments and smiled. “Good morning.” I said with a sigh, a ...
Jul 15, 2011 -
Re: Carry Me Home Chapter 9
Chapter Nine “Are you sure you’re going to be okay? I mean, I don’t have to go if you don’t want me to. You seem really antsy today.” Laynie said. ...
Jul 15, 2011 -
Re: Carry Me Home Chapter 8
Chapter Eight Jonah showed up and Laynie’s with an armful of canvas boards and a duffel bag full of paints and brushes. Jonah sat his things down in the computer ...
Jul 15, 2011 -
Re: I am a Woman
Puhreach! (That was my attempt at being ghetto=]) Anyway, I think this is really good. It really gives people the inside of what its like being a woman growing up. ...
Jul 14, 2011 -
Re: The Man Who Knew Too Much
I'll have to agree with the previous reviewer. This story was really good, it was short and blunt. Harsh almost. But you never really let us know How he knew ...
Jul 14, 2011 -
Re: In The Wrong
I wrote this last night when I got home from a concert I went to with two of my best friends. I wrote it because I feel like one of ...
Jul 14, 2011 -
Re: Satellite Heart <3
I painted this just a few minutes ago while talking to my dearest friend Jaecob. I love him. More than anything really. He means... the world to me. And I ...
Jul 13, 2011 -
Re: Cold Love
Heyy there, here as requested! I think the imagery is great here. The scenes in general that you set up sort of remind me of the newest little red riding ...
Jul 12, 2011 -
Re: Will Review Novels, Chapters & Short Stories
Hey there Icy! I just started a new novel not to long ago and I have chapters 1-7 posted. I was wondering if you could have a look at them. ...
Jul 12, 2011 -
Re: Low
Hey there =] This was reaaally good. I found the rhythm right away and the lines were straight to the point without giving Everything away. You played it nicely. I ...
Jul 12, 2011 -
Re: Carry Me Home Chapter 7
Chapter Seven “So what’s the plan for the day?” I ask Laynie as she’s putting her hair up in the bathroom. “We. Are taking a girl day to ourselves. No ...
Jul 12, 2011 -
Re: Carry Me Home Chapter 6
Chapter Six “What. Are those?” I yelped, looking out the passenger side window into Jonah’s yard. He had taken me out to lunch where we sat at a booth talking ...
Jul 12, 2011 -
Re: Carry Me Home Chapter 5
Chapter Five When Laynie got back from her jazz band lessons, she found Jonah and I on the couch, my head on his lap. We were watching the old Russian ...
Jul 12, 2011
