TylynRae

I liked this a lot. It seems that a vast majority of the population is hooked on Harry Potter right now =] So its nice that you're getting into the ...

I really liked this piece, it meant a lot to me and probably to a lot of other people. The term the same doesn't feel the same really came to ...

This made me shiffle ='] Very well written, I found absolutley no flaws. I think everyone pretty much covered how amazing this piece is and how well it captured what ...

and excuse me, I didn't read before what the words said, my apologies =]

Heya Moti! This reminded me of Alice in Underland =] The shrooms, the eye, all of it just really tied together for me. If I could change anything, I'd want ...

Hey there snickers =] I really enjoyed this piece, I think the imagery was amazing. I had a bit of trouble with the rhythm for a minute, but I found ...

Gah, WT, this is amazing! I really got into the whole thing. The imagery in here was great. I found myself focusing on this hand, rolling a coin back and ...

Oh goodness. This is lovely. I can't say too much about it, cause they're isn't much there, but I think thats what really makes this piece. It exemplifies the 'modesty' ...

I thought that this was really lovely. You're writing style is really unique and leaves the reader grasping for meaning. I don't know how you meant it to be... but ...

III think she looks like an Ellie =] But thats just me. =] The shading in this is spectacular and the positioning is fantastic, I still have to improve on ...

This is pretty much amazing. I looove the girls expression a lot. The only thing I'm only slightly iffy on is the proportion of the boys face, but take that ...

This is really neat! You're really good with shading by the way =] I think these have a lot of potential for a lot of different things. A career is ...

Chapter Twelve Jonah drove me back to Laynie’s after the pancakes. I still had a sour stomach about talking about my dad and my grandpa all in the same story. ...

Chapter Eleven I woke up with the sun beating down on my face. I rolled over, hiding my face in the pillow. I breathed in, the smell of laundry soap ...

Heyyyy buddy =] I have this novel that I'm trying to get different perspectives on. Would you mind reviewing it for me? Its a pretty quick read at this point, ...