TylynRae

I absolutely loved this. Its really great to be able to look into other cultures and see what kinds of things they do and believe in. I had never really ...

This is really good. So much emotion... I don't have anything negative to say about it. The writing was clean, I didn't see any grammatical errors or any punctuation errors ...

Three nitpicks. 1. Your title should be capitalized. Friends Everywhere. 2. I used to center my poems... until one of my teachers said that you're a lot better off having ...

Bahahaha, I absolutely loved this! Its like something I could have read out of Where The Sidewalk Ends, extremely cute and just extremely funny =] The flow was great, I ...

Chapter Seventeen I walked out into the main room of the cabin, self conscious and blushing. Jonah hovered over the oven heating up what smelled to be chicken and alfredo. ...

Chapter Sixteen “So.” I blushed, unsure of what exactly was going on. Jonah stood across from me, the worn wooden floor a vast expanse between us. I could still feel ...

Chapter Fifteen The garden stretched around a small cabin and out of sight. Flowers grew wild and untamed and the only sign of human interference was the small stone footpath ...

This almost made me teary eyed! =] Very nicely done. I absolutely love the front cover. its amazing! =]] Really well done.

Loooooove this =] The program you use looks to be pretty cool. Keep up the good work =]

Haha, this made me laugh. Its really simple and real looking, in the sense that its not perfect. I think it would have been really cool if it did a ...

Yaaaay =] This made me smile. I agree with absolutely all of it, and your humour is brilliant. =] I especially agree with getting rid of the males of the ...

I wrote this piece for my love, my heart. The first two stanzas match up, the last two aren't supposed to fit, the feel changes. I’ll watch you drown. As ...

First off. My best friend would love you. She's like. beyooond interested in the German language, culture, lifestyle, people, food etc etc. She breathes Germanness, though she's irish =]. But ...

This question made me question whether I was schizophrenic or not lol. But I definitely think if you have good characters that you can find their personalities in the people ...

Hello there. Are you new to YWS? I would like to make a bit of a suggestion. When you post a topic, you use up points, which can be located ...