Tyler

This was very well written. I liked the writing, the way it drew you in as the character. Made you think like him, feel what he was feeling. Be careful ...

Ok now I just wanna give you a giant hug and be your best friend... I loved it!That sounds really wrong but I'm glad you look at it positively now. ...

I must appologize, I didn't make it clear that this is not all of the story... I don't write very short short stories and as for the vagueness, I will ...

Ok so I know this is a little long and rough but I thought I'd put it on now cause I'm too lazy to fix it up right now. Tell ...

Ok so I've already told you I'm not an artist and I know very little of art but I have seen the cover of this book and I think what ...

Ok so I realize this is a bit late but what the hay, I review anyway! Hey that rhymed.... I loved your prologue. It's a little difficult reading real time ...

Wonderfully written. It felt like a song. Very beautiful and sad. It felt a bit rough in places but nothing big enough to point out. Keep up the good work, ...

Ahaha so this is what the competition looks like. All I have to say is, wow! You have extraordinary talent for poems. I was so drawn in and it read ...

More dialogue is always good haha. If you liked it, would you mind clicking on the "like" button? I wanna know if this stuff is actually good. I don't like ...

Just three purple caril, Kara thought as she brushed through the tall grass and towards the edge of the woods. The sun behind her felt warm still even though it ...

Ok so it's probably been a while since you posted this but I'll review anyways. I didn't have too much to say and I didn't want to be too detailed ...

Chapter 1 Rowan stood rooted to the spot at the sight of the performer juggling three flaming torches. The night disappeared by the fire that leapt from his mouth as ...

Prologue 10 years ago… Griffin’s heart swelled with admiration when his father swung the heavy axe as if it weighed nothing. Two halves of what was once a miniature log ...

He took a deep breath and relaxed. Finally, he opened his eyes and reached down into his pouch and pulled a round, lead ball. The wind strengthened, pushing his long, ...

Umm........... wow...... I loved it! Great work! It's amazing to find so much talent on this site from such young writers. YOU JUST STARTED TYPING THAT!?!?! I could have sworn ...