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I too loved the arabian-desert feel to it! There is some VERY good description, although in some cases, i think it would be better to not stop and describe something, ...

Reading the first part of your story :D Criticism: Some bits are hard to read. The flow of reading should be nice and shouldn't have to make the reader think ...

=X I havn't hit a writers block, but thats mainly because i've been so busy with lots of stuff, so if anything, i'll write a bit every week :p

Lol great introduction! Welcome to YWS :D The home of all the talented !

I only have read the lion, the witch and the wardrobe book :P I thought it was compelling but not all that great in narrative :p

I'd also like to add that i now love Saturday Night with Jonathan Ross :D

Hehe, weclome to YWS! If you find yourself getting stuck or lost, feel free to pm me :D

Welcome :D Hahahaha, my name is Oliver =X I hope you have fun and enjoy this place as much as i do!

Wow, interesting. I see what your saying about getting free books, you can just keep sending out the book you recieved to get that point back :P *checks it out*

Welcome to YWS :D I hope you enjoy this place as much as we do :D Read and write always!

Yup D this place is a friendly as the grinch on halloween :D Welcome to YWS

:D Left handed all the way :P And i'm also left footed if that counts for anything -

:D And i consider myself to be quite computer technical- i didn't even know about this! This will help alot for me because i am always re-writing and re-cutting of ...

Welcome to YWS :D I love the name Rosie :D If you need any help, feel free to pm me :D

Lol your like me :D I love writing and programming >D Welcome to YWS :D PHP ftw!