TwistedMuffins

Hey there! The poem was really REALLY nice. Wherever one goes, which ever school, which ever country, there always will be bullying. The only thing you need to keep in ...

Hey there! Ah, first of all, when your talking about yourself and you use "I", please put them in captials! Where its, I, I'm, I've, etc. it must be in ...

I all so new , different, wonderful, beautiful and breathtaking. I all so new? Or is it "Its all so new..." ? Boy was I wrong about Australia After "Boy" ...

Alo~ First poem! I think I did fine. Though I need someone else to review this. So... help? :D Thank you in advance! Our friends, How long will they be ...

Hallo there :) It was a really sweet poem, though a little confusing. Error time! :P o You haven't used any puntuation marks :/ They are needed. I'm just reading ...

Um, so for the Middle East, it'd be around 3 am (Sunday) to 2:30 or so (Monday) right? :3

Hallo there! It was really nice! But, you see, the thing is, at the bigenning there was no rhyme and no flow. But then it came and when it did, ...

Hallo :3 This isn't my best, really. I need a loooooooot of help in this. Strip it into a million fragments and tell me what must I do, please. So, ...

Oh My God :'D So cute! Right, back to work! This was amazing, just as any of your other works. You see, the thing is Icy, that when you start ...

Yay! Super awesomness! Sorry I didn't check it out earlier, was lazy, but here I am now so lets review! ... Yeah, I promise to never touch the above line ...

*Breathes out* Finally! :'D Just as excepted from you - Brilliant! Okay, some errors : [Ha, guess you really must be fed up of me and my "errors", sorry xD] ...

Oh, ah, wow x) -> It wasn't bad but you did make a lot of errors. Starting with the rating. Personally, I think you should have rated it 15+ or ...

Hey! Life and Time, two of my most favorite topics ever! Though, I liked the Life poem better. :P I guess you could have tried writing it in a four-line ...

Heylo~ Nice, but it was a little confussing. You used "I" where I thought "He" should come. So you might want to cross check the entire thing. Also, there were ...

Heylo Heylo~! That was a really nice and cute poem! But it did have some problems with the flow. Also, try putting the single words in the line. It will ...