TwistedMuffins

Hey there! This will just be a quick review, so, bare with me xD 1. You're structure seemed constent at first, but it turned 'blah' later. 2. You're rhymes were ...

Hello~! One heck of a peice, I'll say! The descriptions were fantastic and, yes, some parts were rather confusing, but overall the meaning was clear. Death and revenge. As you ...

Aloo~ It. is. amazing! I love the way you've done your background! I can never quite get that texture. You used sponge for the background? :O Oh and at the ...

Hey there! Let me just tell you, I haven't being reviewing for weeks now, so this could be quite, well, bleh. (the best way to put.) Okay, so, I agree ...

Hey there! That was amazing, really. But there were some parts where I had to read over and over again to get it... and some, I still don't. Also, I ...

Namaste~! I would have put this in the "description area" but its too small. *Someone must tell Nate.* Anyways, this poem may sound a bit cliche, but I'm not too ...

Hellllo~! That was amazing! Really! (Haha! Love the signature xD Sorry. I know, its random.) Anyways, the only thing was that you changed the scene a bit too fast. The ...

Hey! This is a really nice poem! But the rhyme seemed a little forced, so you might want to work on that. Also, I actually liked this paragraph : I ...

Hello there! I really like this! It was very different from everything else I've read. Errors? Non that I could find. Well, except this: By the time they reached the ...

Hey! That was nice, but an appropriate rating would be much recommened. Also, there were times were your "I"s weren't capitalized, and you ended your " with '. Stick to ...

Alicia said with a smile , this was followed by a series of laughter. I suggest you use "which" instead of "this". Glad to see you still have your sense ...

Hello there! I must say, this was a very very imagnative poem. But it was a bit too rhyme-y (as the person above me said.) And all the mistakes I ...

Alo there! Amazing poem, I must say, espically coming from a twelve year old! As Aadesh said, you shouldn't put a fullstop at every line. That tends to confuse the ...

Hey there! Writers' block, eh? A serious pain! Anyways, the poem was amazing, though this part: "It’s really annoying.It’s so exasperating.And it’s so frustrating...." I'm not sure what it is ...

Hey there! It was a really nice poem! Usually in people's poems, the rhyme seems a little forced, but over here it was just so smooth, is was very impressive. ...