TwistedMuffins

Right so, my main target was to not (a) Specify gender (b) Use any 'I's (c) Just get the feeling across. So, hope you like it. Tears rolling down fast, ...

Heylo there~! You're now in my trap! Buhaha... Right, I'll just get on with why I've summoned you here. I'm Justtrying and I'm going to do some shameless promotion for ...

Not excatly the best, but well, I've been holding it in for a long time and I think I'd burst if I didn't remove it somehow. There's much more to ...

Hey there! Hope you enjoy my poem! I really liked it, but that doesn't matter. Wheather you liked, is what I want to know. So review~! Thank you in advance! ...

I know this poem's not the best but, it came from my heart... and my heart can't rhyme xD Thank you from reading! And please comment ^^ Years have passed, ...

Hey there! Intersting poem, but I'm a little surprised. You've been here 2 months longer than me, and this is your first? :/ Sad, it is, for such a great ...

Hm, okay this maybe a little tiny bit harsh, so I'm sorry. :/ Okay, first off, you didn't have a structure which was really needed here cause then it was ...

Hey there! Your poem was amazing, really. Although it was small and simple it was very fulfilling. At times, I think you were very keen on using a hyperbol that ...

Hey there! Before I begin with my rambling, let me just let you know, I'm on the mobile reviewing your work so expect a lot of mistakes, as I'm completely ...

Its amazing, really. But um, capitals wouldn't hurt anyone, yeah? Your "I"'s need to be capital, and for some reason I know you haven't done so on purpose (Before your ...

Hey there! Your a really good artist. The left leg of the character you've drawn is slightly out of place and his right eye is awkward too. :/ His left ...

Aw.... Someone's in love ^^ XD Haha, okay, back to your poem. So cute! But, may I suggest a structure? Its amazing, no doubt, but a structure gives that professional ...

First of, I like the title. (I really don't know why, though... :O) Second, try extending the poem a little bit more. No doubt, its really good, but its short. ...

Hey there! First of all, capitals! Please D: (I'm talking about the title.) 2. It sent dry leaves to skate ahead with whispers. I love this discription! 3. There aren't ...

Its really good. But really rough. (As you said.) Puntuations: A lot are needed. And try making some of the sentences together. For example: As the oxygen And cheap light ...