TwistedMuffins

Lakshmi! Nice poem! Just one thing : '' some say, 'when you love, you're in the air'' It should be, 'when you're in love,' Also, since you made a rhyming ...

Hey there! First paragraph, first line: 'kinda' won't work, love. Either 'kind of' or chuck the word and think of something else, 'I am such a fool and lame' from ...

Oh wow. Seriously good! First paragraph, second line: it should be 'just like a toy'. I love the second paragraph! Very orignal. Now, all the other paragraphs excluding 3 and ...

You're baacccckk~ you are, na? Anyways, your poem! Since my phone sucks, I won't be able to quote anything, so yay for you. First paragraph, fourth line. It should be ...

Nate, are you really a law student? :O It. Looks. Amazing!

Hey there! I, actually kind of think that this is more of a song that a poem. Post this in the Lyrics section ^^ Okay, so nitpicks~ Somewhere I see ...

Hey there! I love you're concept but (Oh darn. Sorry ->) its a little old. Its been done alot. So lets see if you're poem forgives and covers up your ...

Hello~ Haven't read the other version, but I shall comment on this one. For you are the wind, The moon, rain and sun. And the journey for you, Has only ...

I'm always trying, Just trying, Dipping my finger in, Or testing the waters. I never go for it, I never do. I never take a spoon full, Nor do I ...

Right! "Review Time With JT" starts now~~~~ (xD) Say anything to get you to stop and stair me dead in eye. Stare* "Jenny , H ow is your mom doing?" ...

Hey! It was a really good song! I was actually humming it (I would have sung it, but if I did, my sister would kick me out of the room ...

Heylo~ Okay, so, um, I see at some places you haven't put any puntuations and that seems kind of intentional, though I don't get why there shouldn't be any there. ...

Helllllllllllo~~~ Here as requested! Okay! So, just a little note, the last part where you thanked everybody, you could put that in the spoiler. Just to make it look neat, ...

Hey there! First of all: As much as I love the plots related to memories, its kinda... over. Cliche, actually. :/ But ah, well! Lets see if you're poem's good ...

Hey there Toe! Okay, review time! My head is clouded by thoughts of love, Line 1 Nitpick A. Convinced by red flashes around my vision, Line 2 Sudden adrenaline, horror ...