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Re: The Backseat Role
(Oh yes! A poem, finally!) Hello! Right, so, nitpicks! To me, cannot a day be saved? A day, a moment, to be un-enslaved? I think it would be better to ...
Sep 6, 2011 -
Re: Poems are for all of us.
I just realised the lack of poetry on YWS today. I was using the "Shuffle" button up there to get something new and unreviewed, or something gone unnoticed. I was ...
Sep 6, 2011 -
Re: Sisters
Oh, wow. I really liked it :) I think you could have made the girl in yellow's head a little bigger.The purple one's hair is awesome ^^~ The grass. :/ ...
Sep 6, 2011 -
Re: Innocent Little Kitten
HI! I'm JT, and here and ready to review your work! Innocent little kitten, that's what they said, for to them that's who she is. Just a plain country girl- ...
Sep 6, 2011 -
Re: Beauty Is
HAAALLLLOOO~~ (Bear with me, I've eaten chocolate. CHOCOLATTEE~~~~) Beauty is...the life that you live; This is more of a personal thing I guess, but I think you should give a ...
Sep 6, 2011 -
Re: The before and after of slapping someone with a wet fish.
Well hello. Hm, it could just be me, but I didn't think the poem had anything to do with the title. Except for the wet fish part. It did cross ...
Sep 5, 2011 -
Re: The August 2011 Statistical Snapshot Spectacular
Sugar....land... Must go live there for sugar... But, whoop! New records! Oh, and would ya look at that. There are quite a few dots on UAE.*Must go befriend them if ...
Sep 5, 2011 -
Re: Another Beautiful Morning.
Another beautiful morning, another busy day. Where the suns just shines, And we walk our way. Another beautiful morning, where we wave our worries goodbye. And we paint on fake ...
Sep 4, 2011 -
Re: Letting Go
...Wow, I love your avvie. Oh, right, picture, right, sorry xD (But, man, your avvie is cute!) Now, the dragon thats flying:- A dragon is somewhat like a dino, only ...
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: Lullaby for A Stormy Night
Hey there! JT here! Okay, so, you didn't have any Captials. Sure, it gives the poems a soft melody, and gives it the mood this poem requires. But also, it ...
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: London Bridge Prologue: 1/3
Hey there! Well, I'm not sure how you've learned to do "Diary Entries" but I've learnt it like this: Date: Time: Dear Diary, Blah Blah Blah Blah Blah Blah Blah ...
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: The Literary Journal Gifting Game
Guess who just got a copppyyy~~~~ Yay!
Aug 26, 2011 -
Re: The Literary Journal Gifting Game
Oh Oh! I want one tooo! I've already got people to join here, I'm sure I can get people to buy the book. (Plan promote book - GO!) *Edit: Ah, ...
Aug 26, 2011 -
Re: Miss Spoiler
Hey! Well, just let you know, whatever I'm going to say will be in a 'Spoiler' 'cause its neat then, you know? I like it neat. Okay, its in the ...
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: Snow Fright
Hey, I'm here as requested. Well, I could have said everything there is too. You know, nitpick and all, but I see the above readers have already done that. Just ...
Aug 23, 2011
