TwistedMuffins

Heylo! Well, truthfully saying, I didn't quite get the poem. And, I'm saying this as a poet myself. So, just to get it clear, there is this girl and this ...

Hey there. Twilight? Dx Oh, dear. Anyhoo, I think you've attempted to write in present-tense, but they were quite a lot of times when your tenses jumped from the past ...

Heya Mikko! Song-writing eh? Hm, not exactly my area, but I shall try and give my best. Nitpick: Now, what I saw missing was the lack of fullstops when there ...

Hey there! So, it was a really good poem, but it kind of gave me the feel of an Eminem rap xD Now, I agree with the person above me, ...

Hello~! Woah, I really liked the last one! Oh, by the way, on the picture of the first one - you wrote "2" under "15MIN", but you titled the picture ...

Hey there! This is really good! :D Just one nitpick: You don't always have to start a new line with a capital. Only if the previous sentence ended with a ...

This is a a little something I wrote, dedicated Nate. Sir, you should know that you have been such a big inspiration to so many of us. I say with ...

Hi! I really don't know what to say about this exactly, since it's just all one stanza. But, so far, what you have written is really good! Why don't you ...

Hi! Right, so far, everything was fine except for the spacing. After every comma, fullstop, or quotation marks, leave some space. It becomes easier to read, really. Now, when someone ...

AKU! Yes! You posted this poem! ^^ Right, so, nitpicks: '' What is death?'', I ask. "The end of life. The perishing of a body. The traveling of a soul ...

Oh, wow. There was so much depth and feeling in this poem, it touched the reader. Nine Eleven was a horrible, horrible day. I do not live in the U.S. ...

Ah.May.Zing!

Hello TheShadowDancer! I'm going to review your work "The Shadow Dancer" xD Lame, yes, moving on. I am- A dancer of tales, a spinner of dreams I wonder- If in ...

................... WHATT?! How come I didn't get that! How did you do it? Gah! I hate not getting a math sum!

You have no idea how happy I am this forum exists :'D Q: "Ann and Sarah has 2 boxes of 30 chocolates each. Ann eats 9 chocolates and gives some ...