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Re: Supreme Team: Rise of Pyro Flame Chapter 1
Hey! I *finally* got to your book! Sorry for the delay though! Frankly speaking, there isn't much to correct. It looks all good. Though there are a few things I'd ...
Nov 29, 2011 -
Re: Pizza is now a vegetable!
I've lived all my life believing Pizza as one of "junk foods." Now to think it's a vegetable, and vegetables are supposed to be healthy- it's like an identity crisis, ...
Nov 23, 2011 -
Re: My Seventh Birthday.
I remember getting up sometime late at night, but in front of me was this bright light. When the light had cleared, what I saw startled me. Peter Pan and ...
Nov 16, 2011 -
Re: To Hear Your Silence
Hi there! I'm going to make this really quick. So you put this in 'Other', but did you try writing this as a poem? To me, it seems like a ...
Nov 12, 2011 -
Re: Have you ever met a YWSer?
Well, I've met AngelReader77 (classmate/best friend), ChocoCookie (classmate), HarryPotterRocks (girl in the next class/fellow Prefect), Oxymoron007 (My sister) Sindhu98 (classmate), Lumiwriter (class
Nov 12, 2011 -
Re: The DreamCatcher - Chapter One
Hey Icy! Well, they weren't many mistakes I've found. But here they are anyways: “Happy birthday. ”My face (Yes yes, I'm being a bit too nitpicky here.) There should be ...
Oct 28, 2011 -
Re: Something I've done this Week
Hey there! It's really good! But here are the points you might want to impove on: Her Hands: Look at her hand. It seems very oddly shaped and placed. Her ...
Oct 28, 2011 -
Re: A World At Rest
Allo! Okay then, uh, a review! A World At Rest (
Oct 27, 2011 -
Re: Mommy, why are you so cold?
I guess this poem's slightly long, but well, it's been forever since I've written something, and it might be a bit... off(?) So yeah, here goes! Also, this poem was ...
Oct 27, 2011 -
Re: A Starving Sensation
Hi there! Okay, so it's been like, two weeks since I've last reviewed, so this may be a little -erm- raw, if you get what I mean. Pointers: Okay, so, ...
Oct 25, 2011 -
Re: Illusive(re-written)
Oh! I really liked this! The imagery, as MeganWeaver said, is beautiful and absolutely brilliant. I really don't know what to criticize on, since it all seems so prefect! Since ...
Sep 30, 2011 -
Re: Illusive(re-written)
Oh! I really liked this! The imagery, as MeganWeaver said, is beautiful and absolutely brilliant. I really don't know what to criticize on, since it all seems so prefect! Since ...
Sep 30, 2011 -
Re: Rename The User Above You
HeadBang!
Sep 30, 2011 -
Re: 4pt suicide note
Hi! Now, um, I not really sure how to review this because of its shortness, but I shall try anyway. 1. Puntuation. Red marks for the need of capitalization, blue ...
Sep 27, 2011 -
Re: Poetry Workshops!
Oh, I would love to come! But it's like at 3:30am here, when you guys start it :3 So, perhaps another time. PLEASE BE ANOTHER TIME!
Sep 25, 2011