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Re: Turn It In. [closed]
Hi there! I guess, I need to review. My reviewing is going slow, thus I need someone to push me to it. That's why I come to you. What I ...
Dec 19, 2011 -
Re: A history of the New Worlds - Maps of post-apocalyptic Earth
*poke* Hai, Mac! There really isn't anything to change. It is perfect as it is. Though, I was just wondering; And in the Northern Dictatorship of Greenland and Greenisland , ...
Dec 19, 2011 -
Re: Snapshots of artificial smile
Hi there, Sakshi! First off, welcome to YWS. Hope you enjoy it here. Also, WAITING FOR UR COMMENTS..... Don't worry. People will review it. Give it sometime. Now, I'll have ...
Dec 19, 2011 -
Re: Under the surface, there is always a conflict.
Now, I'm not really sure where this poem falls. Whether Dramatic or Narrative, I finally decided it as Narrative. If I am wrong, please do let me know. It's been ...
Dec 19, 2011 -
Re: Trish
Hey there! I'm afraid I haven't read the novel, but the character you drawn and of what you said of her, they completely match! Now, there isn't much to say, ...
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: Razors Covered In Filth
Hey there! I'll be reviewing this today! First off, there isn't any uniformity. The first stanza has four lines, and then the second has six lines, and the third has ...
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: The Immortal Enigma -Prologue
Hey there! I'll be reviewing this today! Everything I'll have to say/correct will be in red. He D ied alone. D shouldn't be capital. Deep in the Forest Of Silence, ...
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: The YWS Christmas Story
Twisted nibbled on the cookie Titi had given her, as she heard Justagirl's story. Once Justagirl had finished her story, Twisted slowly, and at first, reluctantly, went and embraced Just ...
Dec 6, 2011 -
Re: Any anime fans?
Well, I used to be a lot in Manga and Anime, but I guess Korea captured my interest with their dramas and music. Anywho, I used to love watching Ouran ...
Dec 6, 2011 -
Re: The YWS Christmas Story
TwistedMuffins: I sat there, as I chewed on the butt of my pencil. As I stared at the blank paper that lay in front of me, something suddenly struck me. ...
Dec 4, 2011 -
Re: Oceans Happiness
Hi, first off, welcome to YWS! Hope you enjoy it here! Now, just saying, isn't this a bit too short for anyone to review? I'm sorry to be so harsh, ...
Dec 2, 2011 -
Re: The boy I fell for
Hi there! My name is TwistedMuffins, and I'll be reviewing your work today :) There are a few things to take care of, like, punctuation. It hurts to know that ...
Dec 2, 2011 -
Re: Christmas Avatar Shop
Could you please Christmasified this too? Muffins.jpg Thank you!
Dec 2, 2011 -
Re: YWS Secret Santa
1.Favourite colours: Neon green, red, blue, black, white, mustard yellow, dark purple. I think that's it? 2.Favourite activities: Apart from reading and writing, dancing, singing in the bathroom, acti
Dec 2, 2011 -
Re: The YWS 2011 Yearbook
It has been eight months since I first joined YWS. Frankly speaking, at first, I wasn't very fond of this site. I felt left out, and odd. Maybe that was ...
Dec 1, 2011
