TwistedMuffins

Banned because you guys are so jobless, the entire 'Randomosity' page is filled with your comments. xD

Buhahaha! I'm here! Eh-hm, anyways, First and second paragraph: I found it quite interesting. There was a nice rhyme to it, and it flowed pretty well. Though, I really wished ...

Hey there, Amit! Welcome to YWS! YWS is currently going under renovation, thus some things might not be available, but they will soon. Our Admin, Nate, is working really hard. ...

Alia | Crashing | Island. Alia fell head first on the aisle, her head spinning out of control. Everything happened so fast, she couldn't capture it all at once. The ...

Alia They were almost there. Alia thoughts were on nothing but the Tra'qaz. Why was it that she felt that connection? She fingered the hilt, which was anything but charming. ...

Can someone please review this? I think it could use a better reviewer than me...

Banned because you guys are so confusing xD

Heelloo Misti! Welcome to YWS! You have come to the right place! I'm sure you'll find YWS very helpful and a lot of fun! ~waves~ -TwistedMuffins .

Hey there! I shall be reviewing another one of your poems! The section you posted the poem: So when I read the title, I was slightly confused. The title gave ...

Hey there, Hamingway! I would love to review your poem, but you have already got two awesome reviews, so there isn't really much for me to correct! Though, I really ...

Hi there! I really like your rhyme here. It seemed smooth enough for me! Though this part; Hark to this Christmas Eve; This year may be our last. The Christmas ...

Hi there Doll! Well, um, I really do not know how to review this, considering the fact it is only one stanza. But, I still managed to pick a few ...

Lol, Eelz! I guess there are 2 poetry-reviewers here! Anyway, I think we should have a goal. Perhaps by the end of the day we can have 6-ish reviews each? ...

Hey there! Weakness?

Hi there! I actually really like this poem! Everything, according to me, seems very well written. There isn't a thing I could change expect this: Your sentences are way too ...