Twilightzoner85

Hey Girlie! Awesome job, oh my god your such a good writer. LOL I love how sick this girl is how she just goes around killing peeps, shes totally like ...

Oh my god! That's so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so good. Wow is that ...

Oh my god, that thing is sick. I love the colors and how real it looks and stuff, and also how hes totally dissing you with his tongue! Please please ...

Whoa, that was an amazing poem. I loved the intense feeling that came to your mind as you read it. Also, you have great detail and really good vocabulary.All of ...

This is the design for Princess Zeldas wedding dress, this design goes with these really cool RPGs that my friends and I do together.

Okay..I think you have some good potential and you just need to have more detail. Like, you could have described the way that Noah looks at Abby and then it ...

Wow, Irish fire that was truly amazing! I read one of your first posts and it was hilarious but this had so much integrity and feeling. I think you are ...

This was amazing to read, it had such imagination and it was very insightful. You really brought the reader into the story, and made it very suspenseful. Also you were ...

This is my first short story, and It is really short so viewers I'm sorry if it is hard to embrace the dramatic effect, anyway, please if you like it ...

Your story was very creative and funny, it was a random play but an interesting one which complements both features of it, good job. Hope to see more written pieces ...