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Re: An Ode To Insanity
Overall I liked it, the rhyming and the language was great. My only query was did you intentionally make it read rushed or were you not aware of it? If ...
Sep 4, 2008 -
Re: I miss you
It was quick and to the point and yet told a whole story - briefly but well. This isn't much of a critique but my only query is what bisquit ...
Sep 4, 2008 -
Re: Western Eyes
Wow! I just loved all the language in that above all else. If I wrote half my writing as you do yours - just wow. It reminds me of kite ...
Sep 3, 2008