Tusker93

Firstly welcome - I'm quite new myself here. And I liked your short story - it's brief and tries to convey a message. It keeps the reader interested in reading ...

Lmao :lol: I love Lord of the Flies and that spoof sounds mint - you should post it up some time y'know!

Firstly, thanks for the review and taking the time to read it Sapphire it means a lot to me :). I've only ever written a couple of poems so I ...

Thanks everyone - Glad I got a good reception and cheers Serenity ;). I've thought the site's great so far and yeah I'm doin' great thanks for askin Demeter :lol: ...

Overall I liked it, the rhyming and the language was great. My only query was did you intentionally make it read rushed or were you not aware of it? If ...

It was quick and to the point and yet told a whole story - briefly but well. This isn't much of a critique but my only query is what bisquit ...

Hey I've been reading the forum for a few days and though I was skeptical at first I was quickly impressed! I've learnt so much about writing just through the ...

Swirls of ocean blue, or a cloudy desert brown Sparks of emotion lie deep down, Fields of green, or an abyss of black It is magnificence like this the pyramids ...

Wow! I just loved all the language in that above all else. If I wrote half my writing as you do yours - just wow. It reminds me of kite ...

Ask what their rates are What would you do if you had the choice of living constantly in a bed attached to a life support system and being tube fed ...

I suppose it's a move to try and sway hilary supporters into voting for the Republicans Woman VP Candidate. Still - the fact she's inexperienced is the same criticism Barack ...

It's been said so many times that one man's terrorist is another man's freedom fighter. Terrorists aren't stupid and mindless people who love violence, they're all fighting for a cause, ...

I'd give a name for it but I would need more details on the plot and stuff for the name to really mean anything. I'd like to see how this ...

The plan is so detailed :o. The concept is great and I can already see a box-office hit in the making :P. My only concern is that the detailed character ...

I reckon if the USA attacks Russia then a sort of WWIII would break out. Russia supplies so much energy for Europe, they would suffer badly and the amount of ...