Tusker93

This is a great poem, I really loved the way you described everything - the imagery was great. I can see you've really put a lot of work into this ...

Sorry to say this, but overall I didn't enjoy this poem. It feels like you wanted this to be scary and chilling but really it didn't make me feel any ...

Youkoso! Hitori Bocchi - from this anime called Welcome to the NHK..

Just echoing what the person above me said. Emma seems like a pretty decent character - a character worth incorporating into a proper story actually :D. I'm not sure what ...

Although this was quite slow to begin with and it didn't really interest me at first, I'm really interested in knowing more about Taverus and what Knox does. At the ...

This World Drifting, my mind waivers through reality It’s cold out here. In our world, time waits for no man, and yet, everyone has once wanted time to stand still. ...

Hey, I really enjoyed this. Specific images such as 'sunless light' and 'darkness unpolluted' really appealed to me. It was easy to read, but I think it needs to be ...

Dude, I like it. You really let me understand how you feel and I think that's one of the most important points of poetry. I really think you should show ...

Cheers for the comments guys, it'll really come in handy editing it for when I have to hand it in. Also - just to clear up any confusion, I'm a ...

Cadair Idris For our English original writing coursework our school requires us to do an account of a part of our school trip to Cader in Wales... So this is ...

Normally when I read or write I imagine characters in a certain 'format'. For instance, normally when I write stories I imagine the characters and settings in an 'anime' style. ...

Awesome, basically perfect as usual. :D I think someone's already mentioned this but... "Yeah, and I poop out watermelons every Friday." That just felt a little awkward for me. Can't ...

Your writing's basically spot on in this one but I've just gotten a little annoyed. The abortion clinic scene and the friend in the toilet just begins to make the ...

Perfect. This was so intense, scary, exciting, enthralling - so many words could describe it. The descriptions were all adequate and more than enough to produce powerful and vivid pieces ...

This had me hooked right from the start all the way to the end and I'm going to read the next chapter straight after I've finished this. In fact, don't ...