Tusker93

8/10 - The speech definitely interests me and I'm interested to find out what's happening to this daughter, sounds like the speaker is almost being forced to give his daughter ...

Minotaur would be the most likely male-oriented genetic experiment monster. I can imagine the genetics needed for a Medusa-like creature to be quite complicated :L. Minotaur could easily just be ...

My honest opinion on this is that you should just start writing it and see where it gets you, if the ideas dont come to your head naturally then maybe ...

Really good job yet again :D, I think Lupis covered a lot of what I was going to say this time to be honest. I personally think that maybe Isabelle ...

I haven't been reviewing on YWS for a long time and I don't know if you remember some of my previous comments on the previous segments but I really enjoyed ...

Well, you're ambitious and that's great - but you'll run out of energy if each story is just a number to you and it'll lower the overall quality of the ...

A miner from abroad :P

So a couple of my friends' parents decided to do a theme for their new years eve party... it was a beach sort of theme... and god it feels ridiculous ...

I had a couple of ideas that might be fun to write about in the context of school... 1. Perhaps write a story about an illegal/underground gambling den placed in ...

I don't know whether you'll think I'm just complaining, being harsh or giving you a valued opinion but here goes anyway... They would probably sound like interesting characters and I ...

What sort of genres do you write when it comes to stories? Romance, fantasy, sci-fi... etc. ?

4/10 - just failed to interest me sorry :(. "He was so close, all he needed to do now was shoot the inbred mutant to regain his freedom."

Well no-one else has answered and I can't promise anything detailed but I'd expect your teacher would want you to just speak about how they account for the other party's ...

I think it sounds like an awesome concept and about the 'too many characters' thing, that's not a major problem for the moment unless it develops into one. If you ...

Well, what do you all think of them? I've personally been interested in writing one for a LONG time and me and my close friend even started one and had ...