TurquoiseRoses

:D. Ya, the romantic dark edge extends to my writing as well. Although, I could never write a pure romance novel, I am much to naturally sarcastic for that. However, ...

Thankyou so much! I will definitely correct those mistakes. Those little mistakes really creep up on you. I am not sure if you will check back here, but ill reply ...

Hiya! So I think the fact that I love to write is obvious, I mean I'm here. :lol: I also love to read, I think they go hand and hand. ...

Hey. I'm Turquoise! I thought I'd review your piece today. So, first let me say that I absolutely love the quilt analogy, it really ties the whole piece together, and ...

Hiya! I was wondering if you could review the first part of my new project? I am not entirely satisfied with it, and would appreciate any comments. I am a ...

Thankyou both for your comments. Its always nice to here that others like your work :D

Hi there. :D So I guess Ill get right into the review. I really don't mean to offend you, but this piece needs alot of work. There were errors in ...

Heya. Well, first let me say the first bit was amazing. I loved the mysterious feel of it, and the dark "Is she insane?" type quality. You had me hooked, ...

All comments are welcome and appreciated. =] This is just the first bit of a longer scene which I have finished. “ Noah! ” a girl screamed, as she came ...

:arrow: So, first things first, the intro. Now, there is nothing wrong with it per say. The only thing is, it doesn't really grab the readers attention, and since this ...

Hiya! First, I really like this premise. You could go far with it. Here are a few "big picture" ideas that I would think about. :arrow: Norwegian? There are a ...

Hey there! :) A couple things I noticed: :arrow: First, this story is inticing. I want to know more. Which is the purpose of any good prologue, right? :arrow: Second, ...