TurquoiseRoses

Hey. Just wanted to let you know I am reading this, I am about a third of the way through, but is there anything specific you would like it terms ...

Hiya. Here's just my two cents. Well, to start out, this was really short, so I didn't really get a great idea of where your going with it, but I'll ...

Hello. So, I have read this twice through now, mulling over what would be some good advice. I really enjoyed this piece, so as much as I would like to ...

Hiya! Just my two cents. I really liked this. It grabbed me, particularly the beginning portion, it's wonderfully written. Your sentences flowed really smoothly. You have knack for portraying human ...

Hello. So here's just my two cents. :D So, first thing I would like to comment on is your sentence structure. It gets a little repetitive, since quite a number ...

Easily the worst movie adaption I have ever seen is The Lovely Bones. Absolutely loved the novel, absolutely despised the movie. The plot/timeline was all wrong. It didn't even make ...

I really disliked that book. For me, it's right up there with Catcher in the Rye in the "classics I can't stand" category. In my opinion, The characters were so ...

Strawberry

I have the first two parts of the first chapter of my fantasy novel up, they are both relatively short. (around 800 words) If you could critque the second part, ...

Your the winner of my "i-feel-like-reviewing-so-lets-look-at-the-pieces-with-zero-comments" contest. :lol: Your prize? A review. Okay, so it's not much, but it's something, right? So Ill start off wit

Hey! Ill be your reviewer today! :D I really hope I am always nice and at the same time helpful when giving reviews, but if I'm not please forgive me. ...

I am planning on writing a novel over the summer, and I am actually pretty excited about it, I like my characters, and I actually have a rough plot outline. ...

Outwardly, Felicity rolled her eyes. Inwardly, she loved him for it. He was the one person who could break through her sarcasm and jokes, and make her examine what she ...

Hey! So I thought I would review your piece today. Alright, so I really like your characters here, they have a good dose of personality and I really liked the ...

Hello! I thought I would review your piece today. So, just some "big idea" things I would think about. Starting to eat my meal I glanced up momentarily to check ...