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  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Enricketta - Chapter One ( Part 1/2... or 3)

    I really enjoyed this chapter; it’s well written, and interesting. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. My only suggestion is how did she get ...

    Nov 15, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Dream and Reality: Chapter 1, Part 1

    I really enjoyed reading your story. It sounds like it's going to be an interesting read, but you should consider changing a few things for example: "My pulse rate gradually ...

    Nov 12, 2013


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