Tropicana

Hehe. Maggie, this is HILARIOUS!!!! I've actually been laughing out loud at this. And it's written really, really well. . Yey, this is my first post here. Woot! YAY! I ...

Very nice actually. I'm surprised this got to the third page *frowns* I would think that you'd probably want this a little longer, have a bridge, maybe a third verse ...

Hey Mary!!! I really love the rewrite. That was funny before... (Ground... around... ground...) This is really better (does that make sense grammatically?) but I have one itty bitty problem: ...

Hehe I noticed that there were a couple leaves in the corner that I missed after I colored it. I should fix it but I'm too lazaaaay. Here it is ...

Thanks everybody. I wish I could actually look at something and draw it. I'm not very good at the whole... proportions thing =) Il tres beau. Elle sont artiste! Tres ...

*Grins* Thanks mer! That's exactly how I wanted it! I tried to do every two lines like that but it didn't work out so well *winces* -Maggie

And.... Part Deux! Later I found a seat in the back of the Charms classroom and put my bag on the seat next to me for Celia. Unfortunately Grey –who ...

Hiiii, I absolutely s.u.c.k at drawing but I thought this was pretty okay... what'd ya think??? Un Fleur -Maggie

First- thank you all for reading! And Second I'm finished with the second part!! Yay! I think I might post it tomorrow maybe today if I finish my homework fast ...

I have to say that I totally disagree with the opinions above. I thought it was a perfect length. (But I'm used to updates that are around 3 thousand words) ...

Hi, I'm sorry if the gay topic offends anyone in anyway I didn't mean for it to be like that. I just thought that if you've read the Harry Potter ...

Whoah it took me two reads to get the full message, but it was really beautiful. And very true. So selfless that it's her for all eyes to see. I'd ...

But thats just what poetry is, writing your thoughts down on a piece of paper or typing it up on a computer then arranging it in any order you please. ...

Thanks Wiggy, Sorry about the random ?'s everywhere... I don't know how that happened.... -Maggie

Yeah some one really did die. My friend Hannah. September 2nd. I liked this... I liked the first two lines but then after that things sort of got ... wordy, ...