Tropicana

I don't mean to be discouraging especially when your new to the site... but honestly, what was this? I was reminded of some overdone [cheesy] musical. Also, rhyming. You don't ...

Hello again! I actually did like where you broke it up. It's edging on choppy in some places though and I think you might want to insert some commas. Also ...

Whoah. I have to say that I am really, really impressed. Like LOST (Emily) said at first I didn't notice that it was reversed in the second stanza and thought ...

Ok first of all, both of you cool it. And secondly Brad I think that even if you feel something that doesn't mean you need to be disrespectful to the ...

I really loved this one. When you read aloud it sounds so cool. fallen from the heights of serenity into a nightmare of addictive obsession how you separated serenity and ...

It's weird seeing nothing but shades of grey and just wishing that there would be florescent greens in my death-time. I really like these few lines. It sounds really cool ...

Gred and Forge =)

Hey Mary.... Dropping in again to say how much I love this and to yell at everyone else for not leaving a review :( Okay well talk to you later...

Great poem! I really enjoyed this! One issue I have is these two lines: worry not, sand is more precious than stars. Huh? I'm confused... Where did the stars reference ...

Wow, I really loved this. It's probably one of the best I've read on here! I'm a kitten on your patchwork quilt in the house that jack kerouac built. I ...

She's too devious though. True, true. She just seemed... Hufflepuffy hehe. And ha! Lupin's in love! *laughs* Or is he?? *fisheyes* Don't censor yourself. It's BITCH, dammit! So you are ...

Ooh thanks Snoink! I couldn't understand all of it but I got the general gist. Thank you!!!! :)

In my french class each we have a pronouciation paragraph that we have to say in front of the class. Usually it's lyrics or a poem or tongue twister (In ...

Hi! I read it and it was pretty good. But like Snoink said there was something... missing. It was like you told us what was happening but it was detached. ...

Thanks! =) I'm so sorry Ididn't post on Broken... I kinda forgot about it *winces* I'll go look it up in a minute....