Triskiller

A bit of a dark piece, portrayal of war in the olden times. When it was still Red Coats versus Blue Coats. Armada of the Damned Drums slowly produce a ...

Thank you very much for the review, again. I like your reviews because you actually give me something to work with, some things to fix, and you also tell me ...

Hey Dreamwalker, you recently reviewed one of my pieces called Smoke and you said you hoped to see more of my work, well I posted a piece a while back ...

To all of you, first of all: Thank you very much for reviewing this poem, I appreciate it very much. The punctuation is indeed the off, thanks for pointing that ...

Something bothers me about this piece, but overall I'm happy with it. Constructive criticism please! Smoke The heartbeats, they are receding The distant breathing is moving further away Is there ...

Very interesting format, love the way you personalize the sound of gunfire with short emotional remarks in between. It blends humanity with the machine and makes for a very interesting ...

Thank you very much for the comment, I think you are right, leaving out "and" gives it just that bit more power. Thank you!

I had a writers block for quite some time and have been busy doing a lot of other things. (including designing awesome posters.) Here is my latest poem: A Call ...

Very nice. The story you tell is powerful and the message it conveys is universal, never give up. (At least that's what I think it says.) Love the vocabulary the ...

Thank you very much. This means a lot to me. :D

I know the title sounds cliché but I think the poem is anything but. I hope you all agree. Forever Suffocated I suffocate myself, Withold my lungs the air I ...

This is my first attempt at reviewing a piece of literature, so it might be a bit.. lacking. :) Blue = Good Red = Not so good/might need changing. Oh ...

What's your favorite genre(s) to read/write? What's your favorite type of music? Classic Rock, love it. What's your favorite color? Bad cliché: Black And may I ask what inspired you ...

Thank you very much for the review. I write these kind of 'scenes' to practice, not really to convey a story, but I see what you mean by it being ...

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