TripleTravelTales

Thanks! I'll start it ASAP! I can't wait! I'll definitly send you my creation with this wonderful idea on my head! I guess I better start typing this excitment in. ...

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE it! I happen to be reading Romeo and Juliet! This is a wonderful TWIST to the story! PM m=when the next part comes out also! PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE! :wink: Keep it ...

Thanks Scarlett! Great encouragement! :roll: Then next parts woun't be as packed with info though. it will be more light and easier to read. I suppose you didn't really like ...

Hey Stori! Keep it up! I was really into the story! I felt like I was there. Yet, you should explain what the cat lady did. For people like me, ...

Did u spell check? You need too. There are many spelling mistakes. also, At the begining you should explian what the unfamiliar words mean. like griffen. People aren't going to ...

Hey Ollie! this is way to short! It like 20 sentances! You need to make it longer for people to want to read it. Also, instead of putting the thought ...

hey Alle! TripTrav here! I like the story you'll be starting. Can't wait for the nest part. Use the spell chack though. i caught a few mistakes. It will be ...

I really liked this. Through out the whole entire story, I was thinking 'What's going to happen now?' I can't wait for the next chapter to come out! You have ...

Hey! This is great! Were's #8? Wish I could do such a great work! There was a few problems though: I nodded and rolled the ball, thinking that they were ...

Man! This is wonderful! I can't believe you have such a talent! I could never write lyrics like this! It's perfect just the way it is! I always need an ...

I thing you need to bring out this poem a lot more. it doesn't flow really at all. This is a start, and I think you should read throught the ...

O.K! Well it's great. Yet, you sort of left me hanging. Do you mind if I write a sequel? I bet I could do it, now that i have the ...

That was wonderful! I could see a story in the song. I sang it out loud to my friends and they loved it too! Keep up the great songs!

That is great! I love this! :smt049 Get the next on out ASAP!!! PLEASE!!! I'm dieing for it! Can't wait for #7! TTT :smt055 :smt055

Thanks! tmasia! :) Do you have any critisizem though? Other people did on my first and second part. But you're the only one who's commented on this one, and you ...