Trinity

iliked the poem

I loved it i thought that itwas right to the point and you got your point across this poem was touching and i understood it it was agreat poem and ...

it was good but i really didn't understand it what is it saposed to be about?

it plays a sweet lullaby, for all to hear, it plays asweet lullaby, as mommy says goodnight my dear, it plays a sweet lullaby, for those who cry, it plays ...

i thought that you're poem was very nice and also you repeated yourself alot no afence

I liked the second stanza

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