Trinity

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i thought it was knd of mean to say that about our english teacher and then let him read it Mr. Hagg isin't that bad but some times you get ...

i like it i ecspressed alot of emotion and i can relate just like i sure pritty much every one and i also have poems like that i just never ...

i like it i Agree with laundrette about the 1st and 2nd stanza i really injoyed it and can't wait to read more of you're poems

for niteowl "it" is a piano

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i liked it but it confusedme just a little bit i found sopmespelling errors but you could still understand what was being said and you're play just flowed together perfectly ...

for itto be a poemit doesnt all ways have to rhym some poems never have 1 rhym so it doesn't all ways have to rhym

the poem sounded to dramatic, i didn't like it very much but over allit really tells what happens when you and other people make misakes

I don’t cry over spilt milk, It’s just not my style, Because I figure, I’ll get over it, After a while, Because what will crying do, It won’t bring you ...

I don’t cry over spilt milk, It’s just not my style, Because I figure, I’ll get over it, After a while, Because what will crying do, It won’t bring you ...

Temptations are knocking, There outside my door, God please protect me, As you once did before, Don’t let me surrender, My life for a thrill, Show me that fun, Doesn’t ...

Temptations are knocking, There outside my door, God please protect me, As you once did before, Don’t let me surrender, My life for a thrill, Show me that fun, Doesn’t ...

I think to myself of how you must feel, Having me locked in this cage of steel, You say you love me, And that you care, But what happens know ...

Up all night, And working hard, Repairs are underway, I’m patching up a broken heart, And trying to find a way, This one’s been around awhile, It needs some tender, ...