Trident

Okay, this is a problem many of us have. It's not easy trying to decide if what you have is worth keeping or not. So what you need to learn ...

Ooh, I've read Holly Lisle's webpage. There's some good advice on there.

Not everyone starts at the beginning. It would be an interesting way of writing, and it might give you some insights that writing from beginning to end doesn't offer. Try ...

It's not always important to know exactly what a person is doing when they talk. Just having back and forth dialogue can more efficiently show emotion and intent. But if ...

Hmmm... perhaps you could use the fact that there is nothing going on to your advantage. Maybe try and hook your audience with something they could relate to. "She pitied ...

I see. So what to Brits call what we call brackets?

I always thought brackets were these: [ ] They seem to be used less often, rarely in fiction. They're more for computer programming and dealing with data.

Very handy. Me likes.