Tres*Chic

It's just that it's pretty obvious she's not going to be a doctor. Sorry. Although aybe her father's just getting frantic. Maybe you could put in a different occupation? I ...

Thanks for your suggestions, kitty! I've actually fully described the background to the introduction at the beginning of chapter 2, where I tell the reader all about the firm and ...

Oooo I like it! The only thing I'll say this time is that I got the feeling in the last part (on Wednesday) that it was moving a little too ...

Yay I'm so glad you liked it! Here's the second part of chapter 1. I took the seat opposite him and waited for him to finish what he was typing, ...

A great story, very deep. Just cut back on the !!!!!! and check the spelling/grammar and it'll be even better.