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Re: No Title Yet.
Hi! I think this is a good start and you should definatley post more! I like the first sentence - some people think you should never start with dialogue but ...
Dec 31, 2007 -
Re: My first story
I really enjoyed reading this, koromone. For your first story I think you've made it really dramatic and exciting in the first paragraph and the description sets the scene well. ...
Dec 28, 2007 -
Re: To the end.
I like the story idea so far but I agree that it could be improved. First of all, watch the spelling and grammar. People will enjoy your story much more ...
Dec 26, 2007
