Treem

It's funny. Have to agree with Okkervilpuddle about that one sentence he mentioned. It's the only sentence I found that didn't read smoothly. Written in it was a text message ...

Hey Conrad Rice. Review here for you. The plot overall is a bit slow in the beginning but then quite forceful at the end. The one thing I don't understand ...

Alright so I'm a bit confused between the two characters involved. So it seems in the first stanza that the narrator is stronger than the other person, yet that person ...

Hey Triky. Here to help a bit. I have to say I had a hard time understanding what was going on. For me it's actually not the lack of a ...

Hey Munchkinzizzles! I'd be glad to help you, not that I can say that my methods are "correct". So first off all, the story. It's interesting, but a bit slow ...

It's very good for a start. The whole piece flowed very well and as coco already said, the character is very easy to relate to and understand. There are a ...

I'm impressed with the use of words, it's not boring and it's not too short. The first paragraph feels a bit stiff, but it has a good enough ending to ...