TreeHugger12

Here's chapter 8. Hope you enjoy! They set off early the next day and flew for many days, stopping only to eat, drink or water the equinas and make camp ...

Okay, so even though I have exams and oral defense for my research proposal next week, I took time to edit and post here. It's the only thing that calms ...

I liked it a lot. My heart is still racing! It drew me in and now I'm hooked! Yes, as the others have stated before me, you have a problem ...

Oh, okay. Thanks once again! :DD

Wow! I loved it! I thought it would be another annoying sappy, mushy love story. I didn't expect the last part. And it was that part that made it awesome! ...

I loved it. It was really great. You have several mistakes in your spelling but all in all, I think that you've done an excellent job.

How will I do that? Like delete the old posts or something? I'm not sure I know how to fix it up...

How will I do that? Like delete the old posts or something?

Oh yeah, forgot about that. You see, for such a long time this story has been in storage. Ven was first called man in the original and it was a ...

It's chapter six but post 5 so you didn't miss anything.. Enjoy reading! It was a breathtaking view of a city among clouds. The city was even more spectacular than ...

Great job girl! Dead parents, ooh, didn't expect that. I liked it though. As usual. :) Hmm... I did ctach two grammatical errors "I tried not to gap at him" ...

My offer of helping you translate your story still stands. If you really want, I will help you write. I like it. There are a few kinks here and there. ...

Writingspitfire: She was walking because she couldn't fly with a broken wing. Thanks for the comments guys!

Oooh! Another one! Me definitely likey! I liked your Story, It was definitely interesting. I like the way CJ reacted to what she saw. Seemed logical for her to react ...

Thanks for the tips by the way. :)