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Could you please please put some captions? I want to know what they are talking about. You know, not just taking it out of context. The others got the suggestions ...

Good job! Yeah, you did have a few grammar errors but that's alright. I don't think its too unrealistic but stela(^) was right. Maybe you should have mentioned the football ...

I wrote this awhile back. During the time when a scandal had erupted in the country. In the Philippines, being a relatively small country, this was a very big deal. ...

I like your work. I don't have much to say except it really made me cry. Remembering the times I act like that towards my brothers, but I know I'm ...

Oh yeah... I like this chapter a lot! You're great! I didn't notice anything bad though. But I could probably comment on how I couldn't quite picture the parent's ghosts. ...

^Jenth: Nah, I think I do need a little harshness, I haven't been taking this seriously enough. ^Writingspitfire: I really appreciate your review, and thanks for all the time you've ...

“Voices, two no, three of them.” Kala said as she crouched lower to the ground. “They’re wearing heavy armor.” “I can’t hear anything. Friend or foe?” Joshua asked, also lowering ...

So I edited it and hope I got all the things you pointed out... By the way, I really would appreciate it if you would comment on my work :) ...

Thanks PenNPaper... I had just started to think maybe I'm a thread killer.... T_T I had already edited it before you posted so I want you to comment on it ...

Liked it a lot. :) Hope you keep up the great work!

Loved it. But you were inconsistent with capitalization. Some of the grammar doesn't seem right. But overall it rocks! It almost perfectly describes what it feels like to have a ...

Ooh... loved it! Hmm... My comments about the German sheperd are: -->You could thicken it's leips a bit more with pencil, this would make it a bit more realistic, dogs ...

Yes, I agree with them, twenty six and sixteen isn't THAT big of an age gap. ten years. The longest I know is fifteen years. I agree with the other ...

I think her mouth is a tad bit too low. I think you could improve the wrist's perspective with a bit of shadowing. It's possible to bend it that way, ...

Nobody's commented yet.... hmmm... o_o