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Re: It's My Turn Now.
Nice. Feels really close to life. But yeah, like hero suggested, more detail please!
Mar 25, 2010 -
Re: New Story!
Hm.... before anything else, I would like to say congratulations on your first post! I like the story a lot. Love the names! Really cool. ^^ Anyway, I found a ...
Mar 25, 2010 -
Re: Music
I like the poem.... however your rhythm seems off or something. I like the ending.
Mar 24, 2010 -
Re: ERIZABESU~ Manga character
It's great! SO cute! ^_^
Mar 24, 2010 -
Re: My pet Chinchilla
How cute! But he has my bros name... hehehe, suits him. It looks like you zoomed too much or you were too close. Don't flash in front of the animal's ...
Mar 24, 2010 -
Re: A lone bench....
I like it. It draws me in. It made me smile. Great pic! :)
Mar 24, 2010 -
Re: Neytiri
Great job! I really love the eyes. They actually look better looking at us. They look so accurate and soulful. The edits rock. They made me smile cause I love ...
Mar 24, 2010 -
Re: Shifters: Chapter 8 part 2
Love love! I absolutely loved this chapter. They get drunk! Haha... now, some of the few things I noticed... "And I promise I won't let any hurt you. Ever." --I ...
Mar 24, 2010 -
Re: The Gollum inside
Its sorta okay I guess... But I liked it. The repetition of the word alone didn't click with me. Neither did the fourth stanza. But I like the message. But, ...
Mar 23, 2010 -
Re: Angels in Death
Quite interesting. I liked it a lot. You did a great job. Now, on with the nitpicks! "Only after she did this could she spend a few precious minuets with ...
Mar 23, 2010 -
Re: There Once Was A Girl Named Jennifer June
You're right I kinda did think it was like that too XD... AS for the glitches, I'll get them tomorrow. I'm getting sleepy already, it's one in the morning here. ...
Mar 22, 2010 -
Re: Tingle
Interesting poem you've got here. Well, I don't venture into poetry often so I don't think I should critique or anything. But I really think that this is great stuff! ...
Mar 22, 2010 -
Re: There Once Was A Girl Named Jennifer June
I have absolutely no idea where I got this idea. I guess it's just so I could submit a poem for world poem writing day. I don't get the story ...
Mar 22, 2010 -
Re: Coming Soon: YWS News
I "liked" Great idea!
Mar 22, 2010 -
Re: Careless Whispers on Cool Summer Eves
Honestly, I didn't think anyone would like this. So... thanks! Oh and I did use to write poetry, but I think I stink at that too. But I tried again ...
Mar 22, 2010
