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Re: Oh how I hate the stars
Ooh, love this one too! It's original, it says something and it takes the subject in the opposite direction of what people usually think. Great work retrodisco!
Jul 17, 2010 -
Re: Blood
This poem was just so chilling. Reading it gave me goosebumps. But still loved it! :)
Jul 17, 2010 -
Re: The colour purple
I love it! But um, who's Celie? Anyways, the grammar is okay (thought I think you should've put it at the start). It's quite touching and sweet. I really felt ...
Jul 13, 2010 -
Re: Shifters: Chapter 14
Ooh! So cool! loved it. It was so funny. But there was a part that didn't quite seem right. Nicholas said these lines. I assume you're trying to make his ...
Jul 8, 2010 -
Re: Of Sheep
I dunno. It's just so cool. Most poems bore me by the sixth line but yours, well, it was something special. It drew me in. The wording was wonderful but ...
Jun 29, 2010 -
Re: The Girl Without Keys
I liked it... thats all. :) Keep up the good work.
Jun 29, 2010 -
Re: You Were There
Can't do a real review cause we've got school tomorrow so all I'm going to say is, great work! Love the poem. The transition from safety and comfort to the ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: Some of my photos :)
I liked it. :D Very nicely done! Although you do have a problem with dead space in some pics. But its cool. ^__^
Jun 23, 2010 -
Re: With Arms Around the Engine (My Biggest Project So Far)
DUUUUDE!!! Again, I know you've heard this probably a bajillion times by now, but dude, INSANELY IMPRESSIVE!!! You don't need help on this... you have your own unique style! Trust ...
Jun 6, 2010 -
Re: Shifters: Chapter 13
Argh! The others have already done the nitpicking for me. Maybe I should check in more often... :/ Anyway, I loved this chapter! Especially the part about CJ and Crys... ...
Jun 6, 2010 -
Re: Shifters: Chapter 12
Ooh, Again I loved this chapie. I don't know where you're headed with Jimmy, but it seems interesting. Keep it up! :D
Jun 6, 2010 -
Re: Shifters: Chapter 11
Ooh.. Loved this chappy!!! I like the bubble scene because, as stated before, you made it easy to visualize. And I also like the fact that she makes sense, she's ...
May 17, 2010 -
Re: Art Finished Over the Past Year
Wow. Just...wow. Can't think of anything to say except... wow. Or awesome. Wow.
May 17, 2010 -
Re: Can I Get a What?
Panda, Bunnies and ice cream. Oh and the cotton candy too! OOh I love them! So cute!!! I want more!!! :D
May 17, 2010 -
Re: Love, Demise and Last Goodbyes ~ Her
Ooh, I like it!!! My Gooshneck! I couldn't stop reading it! I absolutely love it! I noticed something though... "His formally tanned skin..." shouldn't this be formerly tanned? I'm not ...
May 9, 2010
