TreeHugger12

Aw, I was laughing so hard I thought it would bust my op stitches! Haha, It was the funniest (and probably most accurate) depiction of how R Patz would react. ...

Mark of the stones Chapter 2: “Mom?” I muttered as someone patted my shoulder to wake me up. I had a splitting headache. “Mom, I had the strangest dream…” I ...

I haven't really edited it yet, I was hoping you guys could help me out: This isn't the original version, original was a guy and third person style writing. Mark ...

Um, woah. I don't think I understand. Sorry but I think it's too draggy. This kind of writing is probably for the older audience. But you have an impressive way ...

Hm, I write prose usually, but I write poetry too. I also write songs sometimes. I'm a fantasy fiction sort of person though I've written a few love stories in ...

All I can say is AWESOME. Great imagination... Although you should have described the stony rhino thingy even more. But all in all, it was great! Loved it.

I agree with with Classy, you did introduce too much adventure in the first chapter. At least your tenses are a bit better this time around(I think, I'm in kind ...

I agree that fourteen year-olds can get into fights and get bloodied up a bit, but they were among family. With parents and an older brother there, I don't think ...

Maybe you could put in a flashback of what had happened the night before or flashbacks of the first time it happened since you hinted that this had happened to ...

Hello, I'm TreeHugger12 but you can just call me TH for short. I'm fifteen and female. I absolutely love writing and I'd do anything to improve my craft. I don't ...