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Re: Ode to Kamas
It was a cute and sweet gesture. And I liked it a lot. That's all I can say...
Feb 26, 2010 -
Re: Awakening
Gurlaloo, you have to spruce up your grammar a little bit. If you want, bring it on a flash drive and I'll edit it here. Hmmm... You're spelling is a ...
Feb 26, 2010 -
Re: The Mark of The Stones Chapter 3
kinda confusing ain't it? Is it possible to delete posts?
Feb 26, 2010 -
Re: The Mark of The Stones Chapter 3
BTW, you probably read my first two failed attempts at improving this story. If you haven't read the first two chapters of this character's story, I suggest you should.
Feb 24, 2010 -
Re: The Mark of The Stones Chapter 3
Well, I've never really read or watched the Percy Jackson Movie and I wrote this a year ago... But sure, I'll watch out for that. Thanks for the tip. :)
Feb 24, 2010 -
Re: Mark of the Stones Chapter 5
Took me long enough to post... hehe... Tell me what you think and please leave a comment! I'll appreciate it if you help me spot things I wouldn't notice. Thanks ...
Feb 23, 2010 -
Re: The Mark of the Stones Chapter 4
“Are you sure?” asked Myrina with a half smile on her lips. “Positive.” replied Joshua with an expression of anger on his face. “No,” said the one in the green ...
Feb 23, 2010 -
Re: The Mark of The Stones Chapter 3
Thanks again... I appreciate comments like yours Ranger Hawk, they're really helpful! :)
Feb 21, 2010 -
Re: Mark of the stones Chapter 1 and 2
Thanks for the tips and comments! They were helpful!
Feb 21, 2010 -
Re: Shifters: Chapter 5
Loved this one! I loved probably as much as you loved writing it! It was totally awesome!!! I sure hope you keep it up!
Feb 21, 2010 -
Re: Shifters: Chapter 4
This rocks! Another excellent chapter. As others have stated before me, you do have a few grammatical errors but I'm sure if you go over it again it'll be fine. ...
Feb 21, 2010 -
Re: The Mark of The Stones Chapter 3
I posted Chapter two along with the first so I guess this is the Third Chapter... Hope you guys enjoy! :elephant: "What?" Joshua said in a shaky voice, "I didn't ...
Feb 17, 2010 -
Re: Mark of the stones Chapter 1 and 2
Don't worry about me not finishing guys, this story is already finished. I'm just editing but I need some help. SO here goes nothing.... Chapter 1 “Mom, I’m going out ...
Feb 17, 2010 -
Re: The White Knight Epilogue Michael Happy at Last
I like the ending. It has a nice twist to it. :) You have typographical errors, and sound like you're starting to get bored writing this. Aside from that, it's ...
Feb 17, 2010 -
Re: Shifters: Chapter 3 part 3
I just logged on and was lucky enough to spot your post. :) I really liked it. I didn't find anything wrong with it, but that's just me. I'm not ...
Feb 11, 2010
