TreeHugger12

The past tense of lay is laid. That's the only thing I noticed. You did it twice here. Otherwise, your work is really good! I hope to see more of ...

Wow, I don't have much to say. I hate to write an unhelpful response, but there isn't much bad to be said. I loved it. :] I second the motion.

Oh my! Could it really be another chappie?? Yes, yes it is. Yehey!!! I really liked this chappie. Especially the parts where Crys was (intentionally) pissing Ben off. That was ...

Ooh my gosh!!! Thanks for replying... Hmm... I liked your comments and I didn't even notice some of the mistakes I made. Thanks again... I'll try re-editing this tomorrow... I'm ...

Awww.... such a pretty poem... I loved it!!! :)

I cannot think straight right now so I'll just say this.... Nice one.. :) Two thumbs up.

ARGH!!! I would love to but can't! 6 AM on a school day? I'd be IN school by then! I wanna watch!!!! (and listen)

End of the book. I don't know... I guess I just wanted to post. This is the last half of the last chappie. Hope you guys like it. If not, ...

Oh my goodness. That was so totally awesome!!! It kept me hooked. It made me ignore everything else I was doing. You are one talented young writer my dear. I ...

you've got a punctuation mistake, but other than that, it's fine. I really like this poem. It says a lot. There were a few parts where your rhythm was a ...

Wow, I "liked" these Photos. they're great. I like your focus and the angle at which you shot the first pic. You captured it perfectly (the fresh, cool morning dew ...

My fave one was the first flower. It was just so well composed and the focus was really on the flower. I think the second flower was fine too, but,I ...

My, I really liked this poem. It's got a sort of 'demented- but-well-meaning' feel to it. I liked it. And specially that part about raindrops. Everyone can think of reasons ...

I found it funny. hmm... perhaps amusing is a more suitable word for it. I didn't expect that last line, and it leaves us wondering, "what pick- up line could ...

Well, I "liked" it. Like what almost everyone else has said, you need more depth with your characters. Explain why they do what they do. Doing two perspectives ought to ...