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Re: Never Ending Gory
Yes, mother, I love you, But does this mean, I put everything above you? No, mother, it doesn't. Sometimes you just need to see, I NEED to be me. I'm ...
Mar 14, 2008 -
Re: When I do it once, I have to do it twice.
When mommy hits me once, mommy hits me twice, Then mommy says she’s sorry, and that it wasn’t very nice. I know the pain is real, and I know it ...
Mar 10, 2008 -
Re: I warned you Burma
Shouldn't this be in Narrative poetry? Since it's telling a story? Either way, I like it!! =)
Mar 9, 2008 -
Re: The Ghosting Flame
To be honest I only chose this poem because it had to replies yet. After I read it, I couldn't understand why. I like the over all message of the ...
Mar 9, 2008 -
Re: Used
I like the idea of the poem better than the poem itself as well, though I disagree with the person above me about the "But I am a liar." part. ...
Mar 9, 2008 -
Re: "Screaming out loud."
I try to do what’s right, but it never seems to work, I try to make it better, but it only causes hurt. If I could take one thing back, ...
Mar 9, 2008
