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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Stratagem ~ Chapter 1

    Seems like an introduction to an interesting story, but I couldn't help but notice the way you switched between past and present tense. Like LadyJackalope explained, the way you suddenly ...

    Feb 25, 2019


I lingered round them, under that benign sky: watched the moths fluttering among the heath and harebells, listened to the soft wind breathing through the grass, and wondered how any one could ever imagine unquiet slumbers for the sleepers in that quiet earth.
— Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights