Tranquility

Thank you so much for your review, sorry I took so long to read and reply. Any constructive criticism is hugely appreciated, although I admit compliments are even more! x

I know that you commented almost a year ago, but I'm bad at checking when people comment since I usually just put writing here to get it off my chest. ...

Thanks so much for your comments :) They were very helpful, especially since I did not particularily like my first draft, it felt awkward, this feels a lot better although ...

hey! Thanks for your comments, I have changed it a bit and you were right, it was a bit long-winded. Hope this makes it easier to read. Also, good point ...

hello! :) Thank you so much for your amazing comments...I have changed a few things... hopefully for the better but otherwise please tell me! And thank you for the heading ...