Tranquility

Hi :) OK I'm going to start with, I haven't read any of your previous works and yet I was still drawn into the characters and wanted to know more ...

I am putting this post on because it needs help!! So please feel free to comment! Obviously I'd rather you were truthful without being too harsh and encouragement is always ...

Hi! :) Great imagery, it's really beautiful and your words give the reader an immediate picture. Maybe though don't worry so much about making the poem ryhme as sometimes it ...

Today is a beautiful day. The clouds are towering- a Rolling, searching mass of heartbleed blue. I crick my neck and spin, my undeserving eyes absorbing the colour of life. ...

hey! I wasn't going to comment, actually because it's so good and I didn't really know waht to say, but no one else has commented which is ridiculous cause you're ...

hey there, well, I liked the rythm of your song but there were ALOT of typos. I'm no sure if it was on purpose but when you post something, try ...

Hey, :) sorry it took a while for you to get a reply for this. I love the idea behind it, one of those poems which works when reflected, but ...

Wow, this was such a beautiful poem! It had a simple rythm which made it pretty to read but also interesting, here are my critiques, the things I liked should ...

hey! Thanks for your comments, I have changed it a bit and you were right, it was a bit long-winded. Hope this makes it easier to read. Also, good point ...

hello :) Im the first to comment...well I'm afraid I still have to be quick. I liked your poem, and some of the words you used were descriptive and interesting, ...

Hi everybody. This is just something I had to write for English on Mental Instabilities. Its the second try, still not perfect! Any critiques would be hugely appreciated! thanks :) ...

I'm not going to nitpick, I'm not saying there is nothing to nitpick, I'm afraid there is quite a bit :) , but all the same I won't, mostly cause ...

hello :) I have to say, I actually loved this poem...I often say that but this time I mean it. :) I also have to say that at first there ...

just a quick reply...I really liked your poem! I have to admit some of the changes suggested would help it's flow but, just to argue, please don't take out the ...

hello! :) Thank you so much for your amazing comments...I have changed a few things... hopefully for the better but otherwise please tell me! And thank you for the heading ...