Tranquility

Do you know how long it takes to read twenty one chapters all in one go when after every one you have to click back and then find the next ...

I love it :) really. I was a bit confused with the amount of times she got hurt? Was it once when whe dropped her camera or again while she ...

hey :) Just read the whole novel and apart from a few small issues I loved it! I especially love how you build up the characters and you do descriptive ...

Hi everyone, This was my english essay/a diary entry where I got a bit carried away. I took out my real name etc since I like this whole pseudonym thing. ...

Hi :) I actually really liked your poem, I understand what you mean when you say it is a bit melodramatic but it seems to work. The imagery is stunning ...

Thank you so much for the awesome reviews everyone :) They really make me feel better about all my works. Just want to clear up one tiny thing though...I was ...

I love the mushrooms! I mean, obviously the sunset shots are stunning too but it's not as often that you see really awesome pictures of mushrooms, especially good quality ones. ...

Thanks so much annaseale :) I quickly found a way to make it smaller so that you can see it properly. That's exactly what I thought, it looks like I'm ...

This was me spinning around underneath our boat, what you see above me is the sand and below me the bottom of the boat. I edited this to play on ...

Thanks so much for your comments :) They were very helpful, especially since I did not particularily like my first draft, it felt awkward, this feels a lot better although ...

I'm sorry if this is difficult to read but it is literally a diary entry and I never write my diary for others, I just felt like posting it anyway. ...

Wow. Its like one of those terribly sad but undeniably good stories you read and feel guilty at how relatively happy your life is. There were a few flaws sure, ...

Quick reply: saw your name (Harry Potter does rock!), and saw the word Tranquility in your poem, you had an unfair advantage before I even got into it. :) I ...

Hi :) I am here to comment on your amazing poem and give what I hope will be helpful advice. I loved it. Beautiful. The overall image I got from ...

QUICK REPLY= I loved it, beautiful and intense images, you spelt "losing" as "loosing" once so check that, favourite line was definitely "But the vision shattered, its splinters stabbed his ...