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Haha, loved it! I liked how each section coincided with each other! It was confusing but I suppose, each fear, of course being irrational would be confusing. :) Your conclusion ...

I liked the idea of the poem and I understood it, but I feel the vocabulary could have been enhanced a bit to make the rhythm of your words less ...

Me: "Dear, Depression, YOU SUCK!" :x Depression: "I know" :twisted:

She walks the straight and narrow, Never turning to the left or right Those behind her follow. Her burdens become heavy. While, theirs become light. Her pace long and direct; ...

I like the feel of this poem. Especially the first line. I throw a rock and the mirror breaks. I cannot stand to see my face, The emotions are very ...

Moral Compass Darkness comes and darkness goes its only superficial though There’s a real darkness than that of the surface, A stream of wants Closer to the heart of man ...

I think this poem was very interesting. I think that you meant the "it"s in your poem to make the reader think. I believe that sometimes poetry gets taken a ...

Awesome! :) I loved how its right at the time that Alice in Wonderland the movie came out! It has a really clear message. It was easy to understand I ...

I love this poem! My name is Victoria by the way. I like how it flows while still using each letter of your name to begin each sentence. :)

This is a very interesting poem. There was this one part though that didn't make sense. the hospital broods with it's face to the highway a clinic to its face ...

The imagery of this poem was great! I loved the use of the ocean in this poem. :)

I like the meaning behind this poem. How life goes on. its well written too, how its not confusing at what your trying to say.:)

Sparrow You're like a bird pure and sweet, ebbing and flowing in the wind of your own deceit. Lost in a world all your own haunted by hidden sins, it's ...

This is a very thought provoking poem. It makes one wonder what the back story behind it is. It is very pretty. :)

The last two lines was very eloquent to me. it made me think...the message in those last to lines is very deep but you made it look effortless to write. ...