Toto25

RockingSpoons

Hello! Tory here, welcome to YWS! The flow of your poem was fantastic! The only thing I noticed was the lack of punctuation, grammar in poetry is the exact same ...

Beautiful! Absolutely loved it! :)

Hey! Tory here, I really loved the idea behind this poem and it was in stanza's so thumbs up from me! Each stanza really had wonderful descriptive qualities but, there ...

Loved this!! I feel the exact same way, I have always wanted to do something great, be great. It was lovely but maybe you could make it a little longer, ...

Hi, thank you for the review it helped a whole lot! I have edited the story now would you mind reading it? This is a true story, I guess its ...

I'm not going to lie I still struggle with cravings and I have relapsed a few times. But since this day the need to cut has diminished incredibly. :) I ...

Hello, Tory here. I loved the story, it had a simplistic beauty that I thoroughly enjoyed. Although The flow was a bit off, it was very stop and go. For ...

Awesome! The imagery was haunting, the characters intriguing, and the captivating. Overall a beautifully written piece. I am a Christian as well but I still loved it! You have descriptive ...

Hello, Tory here! I liked the idea of this piece. I enjoyed each teacher giving their point of view which happened to be the opposite of each others, it was ...

Jade-green algae sits atop sharp boulders protruding from the agitated ocean. The stones act like a basin, salt water churning with an unmistakable melody, Its rhythm saved only for those ...

Beautiful simplicity! I love the title! my favorite line And on a cross He died all deaths and then He rose again! this poem reminded me of a book I ...

Hello, Tory here you reviewed one of my pieces so I though I would return the favor. I loved the flow this poem had and the grammar was spotless. Although ...

Hi! Tory here, first I would like to say I loved the rich use of vocabulary and the imagery that could be pulled from it. I did notice the lack ...

Hi! Thank you for the review, it helped when you(the reader) explained what you got from the poem. I have edited some parts to make them more understandable. Oh and ...