Torpid

Readers, you should know that this was somewhat rushed and i made it quick. I will most likely come back and rewrite it but i really wanted to see what ...

ok there it is, totally different than what it was

Ok, i have rewrotten this whole 3rd section (if anybody even remembers the first two)so if u like it tell me and i might continue the story. Also, i dont ...

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Thanks, the next is coming soon. I guess i'll have to start writing this more since Atlantean isnt getting any replies. blast... ~Torpid

Thanx when i get enough time to write the third part i will. ~Torpid

Led Zeppelin The Beatles Guns N' Roses Aerosmith Greenday Motley Crue or Crew, w/e Fall Out Boy Bowling For Soup All American Rejects Linkin Prk 3 Doors Down Nickleback Metallica ...

HA!!!! ummmm cows are awesome? OR Torpid!!!!!! mine is the best, now bow down, all of you, er...i mean...sorry. Yea, awesome cow, maybe you should take the award for coolest ...

You plotting on killing me, ladydark? You wouldn't be the first. I think there's a club by now...

Torpid does, best name but i'll let best avatar go to someone else

Thank you, Jigsaw, ladydark. What would i do without you? ~Torpid

That's very interesting that is. I laughed. It was cool. Thanx for that piece. ~Torpid

All you people that were published!!! GAH! Lucky! Is it hard? What's the success rate of wanna-be authors?

That is funny...and well written ~Torpid

Removed. I thank those who critique it.