Torpid

i dont think ill continue it, it was really just a thought that came into my head. im actually quiting a lot of my stories right now anyways. (i hardly ...

there is always a lot of violence in these stories, im gunna have to start putting in some storyline, oh well, the plot shall come next!

a decade isnt that long in their life but it's a long time to be missing in a dangerous world I know i'm not one to talk, hardly ever having ...

was he a terrorist? 'they were the invaders, it was his country to defend'. You referred to the guys as soldiers, u.s. guys? Is this from the bad guys point ...

they've been looking for the waywatcher for a decade or did they just now decide after ten years its time to go look? Other than thta it was short but ...

hey!! Where's the rest? its like 12 at night and i got nuthin to read!wats ure excuse, huh!??jj but seriously, write some more already, ~Torpid

That's very good, reminds me of that movie Elektra w/ the guy w/ the eagle on his chest. I will come back to read more. Didn't spot any errors and ...

Really just a little bored, time killing practice write. Boto carefully slid down the thick rope, landing withought any audible sound on the padded floor of the practice room. The ...

They watched the shadowy figure as he slowly trotted his horse away form the town gates. They were hungry and overly eager to feast upon man flesh. The two grotesque ...

Yes, Salvatore is flippin gifted. Where's Yurok? And i think i forgot to say this before but when i read yurok it didn't seem so elvenly a name but its ...

You dont happen to read R.A. Salvatore's Drizzt books do you, the elf's whirling blades against the orcs (in the earlier parts) reminded me of it. This is good, a ...

The immediate beginning didn't flow so well butthen i heard faerun and kept reading and it got A LOT better. I'll definately come back to read more. Was the orc ...

Have a war between vampires and a society of guardians. Make it bloody. Not all vampires have to be bad. As for names, i like to look up words in ...

yes, i kinda picture Ricirik as having a van helsing type look and between that and the Leadslinger concept if this book ever got published a lot of people would ...

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