Torpid

The first part flowed really well, i wasn't noticing that i was reading so much. ure good. Is the Great Muse like GOD? Dunno if i like that but it ...

Yea thats me jigsaw, jee thanx! it was a secret though! gaw tpbm is a 300 pound personal fitness trainer

I didn't get to read it all cuz im at skool but it looked...GOOD! i'll come back and read it thoroughly next time though. ~Torpid

Prolly wont write more cuz i was just 'doodling' when i wrote this one but thanx for the comments and replies ~Torpid

Thanx ill post the next when i can and i already have lots of plans for this story so, yeah, talk to you all later ~Torpid

Thanx all, im at skool, ill post the next when i can ~Torpid Ive made plans for this story, when i get time the next will come. Thanx for being ...

Thanx everybody, i'm at skool so itas not like i can post a new story/part, sry. Thanx again ~Torpid

Dude, i guess this is ure site but i'd say just to leave stuff to points, the more points the more youve contributed, thats wat they stand for. I dont ...

No i think reincarnation is total bull! (except when J.C. came back, is that reincarnation though?) tpbm loves to read while hangin upside down by their tongue on the monkey ...

Its still flippin tubularly awesome BUT why was the Shadow's muscles straining so hard to catch up with some lil kid steps AND i think if it keeps roaring and ...

Think about adding hints at details such as: Why did the Leadslinger attack Ricirvik? Ricirvik IS the Leadslinger, silly goose, or did i make somehting confusing?

Well i dont keep track of their life either i just rememberered that from one time, gaw.

Thanks, i actually hadn't really thought about making any innocent/heroic Murchalls but thats a good idea. I take your advice. ~Torpid

I thought at first that it was a demon type thang. Either world has a lot of potential but i'd say i'm leaning towards the now world with monsters.

You compiled it all...theres a lot there. Its like a book. I need a cyber bookmark.